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F is for Finishing the Writing Process

Writing a book, even a non-​fiction book, is more of an art than a sci­ence. As an art, the pos­si­bil­i­ties of com­bi­na­tions of words, phrases, ideas and con­clu­sions are end­less. So where do you stop the writ­ing process? From a publisher’s per­spec­tive, you should stop at the place where you need pro­fes­sional feed­back to take the next step. Exactly how fin­ished your work will be when you reach each mile­stone depends on your goals for writ­ing a book and the publisher’s require­ments. (Note: per­fec­tion is not a mea­sur­able goal.)

When I’ve worked with authors in the past, there is always the temp­ta­tion to revise and revise and rewrite, but once you’ve turned your work over to the edi­tor, it is nec­es­sary to step back and let go. When I’ve worked inside of a pub­lish­ing com­pany, I’ve been able to use the com­pressed time­lines and bud­gets of the com­pany to make authors stop, I’ve found that the pub­lish­ing process for self-​published authors tends to be more pro­longed and dif­fi­cult. Simple projects go on for months longer than they need to as authors con­tinue to revise.

How do you know you are fin­ish­ing writ­ing a book?

Have you read the piece back, prefer­ably out loud? Did you fix all of the minor typos and spelling mis­takes? Then it is done. Move on to the next task.

Here are the obvi­ous fin­ish­ing places in your writ­ing process:

Stop Here #1. Send the book query to agents and pub­lish­ers. What you need to have com­pleted: A sum­mary and a chap­ter or two. At this point in the writ­ing process, the pub­lisher looks for authors with strong ideas and tal­ented writ­ing, not man­u­scripts. Stop and get feed­back. In my expe­ri­ence, that it is most likely that edi­tors need a book that is like yours, and they might offer you a chance to write the book they want rather than the book you pro­posed. Likewise, if you get no nib­bles for the book, you can start again with a new con­cept much more quickly. Perhaps you want to spend your newly found days on mar­ket research?

Stop Here #2. The fin­ished man­u­script. Sometimes (OK, most often) the day to stop the writ­ing process is the day that the man­u­script is due. Ideally, the time to stop is about two weeks before your book is due. It will not be per­fect, but it should be fin­ished to the best of your abil­ity and good enough. I wish all authors had the willpower to aban­don the project down for a lit­tle while, and re-​read it one more time before you sub­mit. You know you are done writ­ing a book when the man­u­script ful­fills the promises of the sum­mary and you have the req­ui­site num­ber of chap­ters and word count. The bane of my exis­tence as an edi­tor were authors who re-​submitted rewrit­ten man­u­scripts one or two weeks after the first one. Once you’ve sub­mit­ted the man­u­script hold tight. Maybe you want to work on your blog?

Stop Here #3. The edi­to­r­ial review. Once your man­u­script is edited, your job is to assess the edits and make sure that no mean­ings where changed or errors inad­ver­tently intro­duced. Authors expe­ri­enced with the pub­lish­ing process know to wield a light pen­cil here. Focus on the edits, Please don’t revise the man­u­script or por­tion of the man­u­script unless the edi­tor has dic­tated it. On sev­eral occa­sions, I’ve received re-​worked books from authors at this late stage in the writ­ing process, which means my invest­ment in edit­ing was a waste. Perhaps you should be work­ing on your next book?

Stop Here #4. Review of pages. At this stage in the pub­lish­ing process, authors get to see what the book looks like in the final lay­outs. At this stage, authors shouldn’t be edit­ing or chang­ing any­thing, but rather look­ing for mis­placed cap­tions, miss­ing words and the like. Remember, you were done writ­ing the book when you sub­mit­ted the man­u­script, and expe­ri­enced edi­tors and design­ers have been help­ing with the pub­lish­ing process, doing what they do

Stop Here #5. The book is at the printer. What are you think­ing? You are totally fin­ished writ­ing a book! Go work on your Twitter feed.

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E is for Editor

My high school English teacher told me that I would have a bright future as a copy­ed­i­tor. That was when I was on my way to col­lege in the big city to study International Affairs. I was going to be a diplo­mat at the United Nations, and then I changed my mind…I was going to be an archi­tect. The idea of an edi­to­r­ial career never crossed my mind.

Until, after grad­u­at­ing col­lege into a rough mar­ket to be an archi­tect, I landed a sweet job as an edi­to­r­ial assis­tant at an archi­tec­ture mag­a­zine. I loved edit­ing, pri­mar­ily for the rea­son that it gave me access to so many inter­est­ing peo­ple and ideas. I’d had a lib­eral arts edu­ca­tion in archi­tec­ture, and I was amazed to meet and inter­view the most promi­nent archi­tects of our time. Instead of going to grad­u­ate school in archi­tec­ture as I had planned, I stayed in pub­lish­ing, fol­low­ing a chain of pro­gres­sively more inter­ested and respon­si­ble edi­to­r­ial jobs.

It takes a vil­lage to edit a book.

There are sev­eral dif­fer­ent kinds of edi­tors that I know:

Acquiring, Acquisitions or Commissioning edi­tor. This is the taste-​making edi­tor who brings new books and their authors to agree­ments with a pub­lish­ing house. The acqui­si­tions edi­tor is respon­si­ble for shap­ing the pro­posal, work­ing with agents, shep­herd­ing the pro­posal to the pub­lisher, mar­ket­ing, and sales teams. As a gate­keeper, the acqui­si­tions edi­tor is often the pri­mary con­tact between the pub­lish­ing com­pany and the author. She is also and is the book’s inter­nal cham­pion and will defend the books bud­get and mar­ket­ing pri­or­ity. At some pub­lish­ing com­pa­nies, the acqui­si­tions edi­tor receives sign­ing bonuses and has clearly defined sign­ing and rev­enue (value) targets.

Development Editor. A devel­op­ment edi­tor, often a free­lancer, helps the author to cre­ate a com­plete man­u­script. This often means detailed re-​organization and even re-​writing. The devel­op­men­tal edi­tor might also help the author to secure any rights or per­mis­sions for illus­tra­tion or pho­tog­ra­phy or quoted text. Depending on the num­ber of books in a pub­lish­ing pro­gram, the Acquiring edi­tor may or may not be respon­si­ble for the devel­op­ment of the man­u­script. Some pub­lish­ing com­pa­nies have devel­op­ment edi­tors on staff who actu­ally write and cre­ate books as they go.

Once the man­u­script is approved by the pub­lish­ing team and is con­sid­ered com­plete, the man­u­script is “trans­mit­ted” to the publisher’s pro­duc­tion department.

Managing Editor. The man­ag­ing edi­tor is typ­i­cally in charge of the book’s pro­duc­tion process. The keeper of the sched­ules and pro­duc­tion bud­gets the man­ag­ing edi­tor pro­vides an esti­mate for the cost of pro­duc­ing the book and assigns the book to the edi­to­r­ial and design staff. The man­ag­ing edi­tor sets the house stan­dards for edi­to­r­ial and design, and makes sure that final edi­to­r­ial files are ready to go to the printer. Because the man­ag­ing edi­tor over­sees the pub­lish­ing pro­gram as a whole, she is rarely very involved with any one par­tic­u­lar book.

The Copyeditor. This is an amaz­ing picky, detail-​oriented per­son who care­fully checks the man­u­script for typos, gram­mat­i­cal errors and prob­lems with con­sis­tency or logic. Often, the copy edi­tor also “tags” a man­u­script for pro­duc­tion, which means she marks up all of the head­lines, quo­ta­tions, side­bars, boxes, cap­tions, lists, foot­notes and other book ele­ments. The copy­ed­i­tor may also pro­vide the book’s front mat­ter accord­ing to the publisher’s style. (There are also edi­tors who spe­cial­ize only in tag­ging, and I imag­ine that the copyeditor’s role will expand as e-​book ele­ments will also have to be specified.)

The Indexer. Not every book has an indexer, but these are spe­cial­ized edi­tors too who decide which items are impor­tant enough to be called out and who com­piles the books’ index.

The Proofreader. When every­one else is done with the book, a proof­reader pro­vides a fresh set of eyes to make sure that all of the pre­vi­ous edits did not intro­duce new errors when the old ones were cor­rected. If the copy­ed­i­tor marked up the man­u­script by hand, she’ll also make sure that all of the cor­rec­tions were incor­po­rated into the final version.

Why I NaNo

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Right after din­ner tonight, I’m going to start writ­ing my sec­ond novel. I’m not sure what it is going to be about, but I do know that I’ll have a com­plete draft by the end of the month. I’d first heard about National Novel Writing Month, affec­tion­ately known as NaNoWriMo at the O’Reilly Tools of Change in 2009. Chris Baty, an anthro­pol­o­gist and founder of the annual non-​profit event, talked about how com­mu­ni­ties come together around a com­mon cause. For NaNoWriMo, that goal is just to write.

Just write 50,000 words in a sin­gle month. 50,000 words are a piti­fully short novel – that’s about 90 printed pages of text, but it is enough words to have a spine, if not any real thud fac­tor. The best part of NaNoWriMo, for me at least, is two-​fold, the foun­da­tion of a daily writ­ing prac­tice. As an edi­tor and pub­lisher, I’d shep­herded many dozens of books to the fin­ish line, but before I wrote Buffalo Kat (don’t ask!) last year, I’d never fin­ished a com­plete cer­ti­fi­able man­u­script on my own. Of course, it was awful, but I learned quite a bit in the doing: I have a sick imag­i­na­tion, I remem­ber more details (or can at least imag­ine more details) than I thought my mind could carry, and, when I’m in the groove, writ­ing is almost more fun than read­ing. It’s also a fan­tas­tic excuse to get out of hav­ing to help clean out the gutters.

You write as fast as you can. Steady writ­ers should under­take a clip of 1,660 words a day. Those who have a day job go on week­end writ­ing binges. When the novel is fin­ished, you upload it to the NaNoWriMo servers. The WriMo com­put­ers count the words, and promptly deletes the uploaded file – 50,000+ words, you win! There is no dis­crim­i­na­tion, and books with char­ac­ters who stut­ter get there faster. There are no prizes in NaNoWriMo, other than a down­load­able cer­tifi­cate (suit­able for fram­ing), brag­ging rights, and the abil­ity to buy a t-​shirt that says “I’m a winner.”

I’ve been around books for so long, it’s my goal to write a mon­ster best-​seller, retire, and to spend the rest of my days read­ing on a beach. In the mean­time, NaNoWriMo is get­ting me ready.